Grammar and spelling errors: Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university' Suggestion: a ...y for adolescents. With this era trend, an controversy about how to treat people h... ^^ Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: doesn't ...ust have an imagination, if your friend doesnt take your sense into consideration, alw... ^^^^^^ Line 3, column 963, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: don't ...he people with rude behaviors seem like dont take our friendship seriously. Eventual... ^^^^ Line 3, column 1109, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1] Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose' Suggestion: lose ...the one, which means the rude one would lost his friends unfortunately. Furthermo... ^^^^ Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1] Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean' Suggestion: mean ...e would society. And when I say this, I means that impolite people always regard them... ^^^^^ Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: doesn't ...selves as the center of the world, they doesnt care anything else, including the publi... ^^^^^^ Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: There's ..., children, cleaning workers and so on. Theres an online survey on Sina.com revealed t... ^^^^^^ Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2] Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'. Suggestion: existed ... are impolite but nice, they are indeed exist. However, as most impolite people Ive m... ^^^^^ Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: I've ...exist. However, as most impolite people Ive met arent aggregable and nice, and remi... ^^^ Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: aren't ...owever, as most impolite people Ive met arent aggregable and nice, and reminding of t... ^^^^^ Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING Message: Possible spelling mistake found Suggestion: there's ...dual perspective or social perspective, theres evert reason to believe that its not go... ^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used: apparently, but, frankly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, still, then, whereas, while, for instance, i mean

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech: To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted. Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words: No of characters: 2383.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK Chars per words: 5.24889867841 4.8611393121 108% => OK Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK Word Length SD: 2.67731345488 2.67179642975 100% => OK Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.524837075471 102% => OK syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by: Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences: How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long. Sentence length SD: 60.4444699755 48.9658058833 123% => OK Chars per sentence: 132.388888889 100.406767564 132% => OK Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.6045352989 122% => OK Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted. Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted. Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion: Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321123947654 0.236089414692 136% => OK Sentence topic coherence: 0.109234276166 0.076458572812 143% => OK Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710263483528 0.0737576698707 96% => OK Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19289683808 0.150856017488 128% => OK Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354292982556 0.0645574589148 55% => OK

Essay readability: automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OKWhat are above readability scores?

---------------------Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30 ---------------------Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.